martes, 11 de noviembre de 2014

The last time

In this task we have to write a story between 450 words and 600 words the only requisit was that the story have to finish like this (and that was the last time he or she see each other)

                                              The last time
"it´s amazing", exclaimed max
"yes  here are a lot of pretty ladies ", steven said hapilly
"yes it´s true steven"

The waiter came and asked them if they wanted to drink something.
Max asked for a caipirinha and Steven wanted a beer
The place was beautiful , the sea was blue, the sun was shining , the hotel was amazing and also the sand was white

"thank you " , said steven and the waiter came and gave him the beer

a girl with blond hair, blue eyes and perfect hands came across them

"oh my goodness" , exclaimed steven
"man,go ands talk with her " , said max

steven with his brown and shiny eyes, his blond hair and his perfect well built body went and talked to her

"hello" , greeted steven
"hello", said the girl
"which is your name" , asked steven
"my name is estephany " , answered estephany
"ok.you didn´t ask mine but i will tell you. my name is steven"
"nice to meet you estephany  do you want to drink something ", asked steven
"yes of course " she accepted


They called the waiter and they ordered their drinks


"you are so beautiful ", he whispered
"oh thank you "

"this place is incredible " " what do you think?", asked steven
"yes , it´s good and also you´re amazing", shouted estephany

in that moment steven gave her  a kiss , it was for  a long time and then they stopped , it was right


"oh no it´s  right "
"yes it´s true" said steven "when did you leave ? " "tomorrow" she said
"oh no what are we going to do?" asked steven
"i don´t know.maybe enjoy this last moment " , she said

a silence took over them. steven noticed that he didn´t know where she was from, so he wanted to ask her, but he was afraid because if she told him that she was from another country they won´t be able to be together any more but finally he decided to ask her


"where do you come from?" , asked Steven
"from england and you" , asked Stephany
"from the usa"
"i can´t believe it i fell in love with you.it was love at first sight" said . Stephany

"yes, i know", said Steven
"what are we going to do" i couldn´t live without you, said Steven
"yes i know , i will miss you a lot you are my first love and i wouldn´t let you go"

"give me your phone number so i can get in contact with you" , said Steven

"please steven, come with me to england, we are going to be very happy and we are going to form a big family", said Stephany


"but i can´t , i have all my family and my friends in united states it would be very difficult for me to forget about my mom and my dad , i would not resist it " , said Steven


In that moment both of them were crying and kissing each other

"well it´s a pitty to finish like this i will miss you a lot, kisses" , exclaimed Stephany

"bye kisses", i wish we could meet each other again ", said Steven

they gave their phone numbers and that was the last time they ever saw eachother. 




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