Monologue Max

In drama i created my own character. It s called max. I wrote a monologue to. Give his voice, this is me playing the role 

When i was 6 years old, I was an ordinary child,but all that changed the day I was walking with my father at night and a group of thiefs killed my father, I felt devastated so I wanted to take revenge so I started training . The murder of my father drove me crazy and i spend the days thinking and planning how to kill them and make them suffer a lot. I had so much hatred and anger inside me that my face started to deform and my eyes started to transmit hatred, I was a horrible person inside me and outside me. When I could get a well built body, I started searching for the thiefs that killed my father and when I thought that all was lost , I saw a thief stealing , and that thief was one of those who killed my father , so I started punching his face like if it was a boxing bag until I killed him, 2 days after the police discovered me and I was imediatly sent to prision and in the only thing that I was thinking was in those other 2 thiefs that are free. but believe It or not  the 2 thiefs were on prision Because they robbed a bank so I waited until night. So I took a brick that was on the floor and I started hitting them, when a police officer came it was too late, I killed them.

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