lunes, 7 de septiembre de 2015

Poem

For my grandmother coockies:
When she coocks she makes´s
me feel very happy even
though i had a bad day
she make me fat no matter what

silvia is very old
but she coocks like
if we were an army
i love her love her like my mommy

1 comentario:

  1. Sweet as cookies.

    There are a couple of spelling mistakes that could have been edited, remember to do a careful revision before publishing. Use capital letters for names and for the word I. Also, you forgot to include what literary devices you´ve used.

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